adrikitty21
Posts : 6 Join date : 2012-08-09 Age : 30 Location : Richmond, TX
| Subject: Alazia Yazzie Thu Aug 09, 2012 7:13 pm | |
| Character Sheet Name: Alazia Yazzie Nickname: Aly Age: 20 Gender: Female Height: 5'8 Weight: 160 Picture: [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]Personality: independent, non-judgemental, strong, fighter, occasionally violent, flirty, non-trusting Likes: pizza, weapons, winter, music, sports, mind games, dark colors Dislikes: most vegetables, summer, home economics, bright colors, liars Strengths: smooth talker, fast runner, social butterfly in general population Weaknesses: low self-esteem, sensitive, average strength (can't pick up heavy items, etc.), impulsive Hobbies: music, sports, cooking, video games History: Alazia Yazzie is the daughter of Carolyn and Brent Yazzie. They had been married for 20 years before everything went downhill. Brent was the owner of a chain of drugstores in Pleasant Grove, and he made plenty of money to show for it. However, he had a major gambling problem, and would not online gamble in the casinos, but online also. He bet money on horse races and stock market crashes. Carolyn was a 3rd grade teacher at Pleasant Grove Elementary. She was a kind, gentle soul who never hurt anyone. She wasn't aware of her husband's gambling problem. But one day, his past caught up with him. A man by the name of Richard Presley made a bet with Brent over a horse race. Brent lost the bet but never payed up. He owed Richard $4000. On the night of Alazia's 5th birthday, Brent went out and bought her a giant dollhouse. Richard, who lived in the neighborhood, happened to pass by, and on the sight of the gift, the size of Brent's Sequoia, and immediately turned furious. He broke down the door to the Yazzie house, and before Brent could react, Richard had grabbed the cake knife and slit his throat. He turned on Carolyn and did the same to her. Alazia hid under the table as Richard ran out the door. When she thought it was clear, she ran next door and told the neighbors. Since then, she's been bounced around from foster home to foster home until she was 18. She got a good enough salary as a secretary over the years to save up for her own apartment. She currently lives in a house with her boyfriend of 2 years. Inventory: lighter, pocketknife, ipod, pencil, cell phone Special Notes: suffers from depression. Currently lives at 4738 Midwhich Street.
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KraziiKitsune Admin
Posts : 41 Join date : 2012-08-02 Age : 31 Location : Garland, Tx
| Subject: Your history Thu Aug 09, 2012 7:22 pm | |
| could you post a longer history? We need a full length bio that way we'd be able to work on your plot better.
Please and thank you :3 | |
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KraziiKitsune Admin
Posts : 41 Join date : 2012-08-02 Age : 31 Location : Garland, Tx
| Subject: Re: Alazia Yazzie Thu Aug 09, 2012 10:19 pm | |
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Sentients Admin
Posts : 28 Join date : 2012-08-02
| Subject: Re: Alazia Yazzie Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:33 pm | |
| [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]Your Weakness and strengths are not equal... I overall think your character has a pretty well made build. However, I would like it if you can even out your strengths and weaknesses. Your strengths for one are about all the same. I would say that she is a social butterfly when it comes to standard interactions and what is she fast with? Talking or actual speed (i.e. Running)? The more accurate and details you can give th e better we (i.e Krazii and myself) can make your experience here Love to see your character in action soon -Sentients P.S If you need help I am also here to assist | |
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KraziiKitsune Admin
Posts : 41 Join date : 2012-08-02 Age : 31 Location : Garland, Tx
| Subject: Re: Alazia Yazzie Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:42 pm | |
| Strengths are suppose to be complimenting each other. As for fast, that can mean anything. Speaking of..you never told me why your character felt guilty Sentients. I'm still waiting on that one. | |
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Sentients Admin
Posts : 28 Join date : 2012-08-02
| Subject: Re: Alazia Yazzie Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:08 am | |
| Yes, well I'm saying that she can turn all of those into one big strength and then use the slots for others. This is silent hill... Survival comes to those with the most preparation... and even then you can die... Also my character got locked... | |
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adrikitty21
Posts : 6 Join date : 2012-08-09 Age : 30 Location : Richmond, TX
| Subject: Re: Alazia Yazzie Fri Aug 10, 2012 10:42 am | |
| I changed up her strengths and weaknesses. let me know if that helps | |
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Sentients Admin
Posts : 28 Join date : 2012-08-02
| Subject: Re: Alazia Yazzie Fri Aug 10, 2012 11:53 am | |
| It's getting there. One more weakness... or delete one strength and your there. Lol I wonder if anyone remember the athleticism of Harry Mason... the guy just has an infinate running bar... | |
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adrikitty21
Posts : 6 Join date : 2012-08-09 Age : 30 Location : Richmond, TX
| Subject: Re: Alazia Yazzie Fri Aug 10, 2012 3:57 pm | |
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Sentients Admin
Posts : 28 Join date : 2012-08-02
| Subject: Re: Alazia Yazzie Fri Aug 10, 2012 4:43 pm | |
| vey good Thank you for meeting my demands lol. [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]Approved 1/2 | |
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adrikitty21
Posts : 6 Join date : 2012-08-09 Age : 30 Location : Richmond, TX
| Subject: Re: Alazia Yazzie Fri Aug 10, 2012 4:47 pm | |
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